The legend of Neo

Asking Out of confusion , why r u doing this ?
They gave six 6* tickets on 5th anniversary instead of 6th . Don’t u see the message here ?

So…

Title: I guess… Last Breath?

There is a monster that has been cursed with death sentence

{For the sake of simplicity, I will name it Bob}

{Because it is out in the wild, it dies upon being defeated}

Bob technically should have died, but it killed the Sanctistag on the exact second it should have triggered
Now, this monster is truly cursed: if Bob ever enters combat again, it will die immediately

This has forced it to lie low, giving up anything that anyone so desires for a fear of engaging in a battle

Enter:
A bloodthirsty tyrant among monsters, its fearsome army it brings with it lays waste to the whole land, spreading horror and fear as it goes

{for the sake of simplicity, I will name them Tim}

Word of a Reaping has begun drifting through the wilderness
Tim has become so bold that it made a challenge: any monster that can subdue it in a one - on - one battle will be spared of this mysterious “Reaping”
During this challenge, any participating monster is allowed to travel to its hidden kingdom and fight Tim

Bob does not realize this is a threat until its home is attacked
It returned home to find several monsters ravaging its home
It realized that these monsters were part of the tyrant’s horde
It was seen by them, and was pursued through the forest

These monsters learned to fight without risk, using weapon instead of engaging in combat
they hurled spears at the first monster, and murdered other monsters in the way
Bob barely made it out alive, fleeing from the comfortable plains to the wilderness

Bob decides this is its chance to make itself useful: it thinks that there might be a way to topple the kingdom without ever fighting once
This courage causes it to travel to the kingdom to “fight” - in reality, it is looking for a way to destroy it

Along the way in a forest, Bob sees from a distance monsters sparring to see who is worthy of fighting the tyrant
It knows it will die if it is even fought once
Forced to hide and wait for night time, Bob makes little progress hiding in the trees

At night, it makes a dreaded dash to its destination
Nocturnal monsters become active at around this time, forcing Bob to stealthily and swiftly travel through the undergrowth
A lunartic is disguised in the sky, waiting to ambush an enemy in an unfair fight
Bob doesn’t realize this until the Lunartic is near it

[combat is engaged by the two monsters making contact]

The monster narrowly dodges the lunartic’s swoop, causing Bob’s heart to race as its life dangles in peril
The lunartic tries using its Moon Darts {the floaty things in its design} to hit Bob
Bob dodges some of these and, learning from the monsters that destroyed its home, picks up a branch to hit them
After an intense, the Lunatic turns around reluctantly and floats away, realizing that they were almost out of cover
The monster feels relief, but then a sudden feeling of dread, as it had barely made any progress toward the kingdom

{PART ONE}

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Nice…Waiting for pt.2

After a few days of traveling stealthily, Bob realizes that it did not bring anything because its home was destroyed
It must get food and water to survive, but that is a challenge with its curse
Bob decides to raid other monsters in the forest for resources

Dodging bold challengers, Bob stumbles upon a sleeping Megaiasloth
The Sloth is not trying to get to Tim’s kingdom because it lives here
It has a large stash of food beside it
Bob attempts to steal some using a stick
It is successful, and Bob gets away without any consequences

The Megaiasloth wakes up and realizes that some of its food has been stolen
This is important because it collected just enough to survive hibernation
Without extra resources, the Sloth will be unable to feed its cubs without starving itself
It proceeds to go to where it got its food, but it is barren because of the challengers eating as they travel
The Sloth gives a desperate roar, ready to do anything to feed its young

Bob realizes this and decides to collect food for the Megaiasloth
It begins hunting and foraging using the tools it has made
After hunting for a while, it stumbles upon a small monster obscured by shadow
Bob throws its spear, but then the shadows reach out and grab the spear

The monsters was a Wraithost, trying to get other monsters to attack it so it could catch them off guard
Bob quickly realizes this and begins running away
The Wraithost begins aligning with the sun, creating shadows that begin forming into physical forms

Bob cuts them with its spear as it runs
The shadows begin weakening because the sun moves overhead
Seeing an opening, Bob then turns sharply and throws a spear at the Small Host
Because of the sun’s rays, there are no shadows left to protect it
The spear pierces the Host’s side, causing black blood to begin pouring

Bob uses this as an opportunity to escape, but then realizes that the Host could still come back and fight it
Bob cautiously approaches the Wraithhost, unsure if it is faking injury
The Host makes an attempt to run away, but its knees shake under the effort
It continues to advance on the small fox
The Wraithhost cannot cast shadows because it is midday
The Host sighs in defeat
Drawing a deep breath, Bob decides to end its misery

Suddenly, a mouth forms from the shadows and attempts to take a bite out of Bob {desperate bite}
Bob barely avoids this attack and plunges the spear into the Host’s neck

After killing the Wraithost, Bob looks around for any form of food
At first, attempting to eat the Host seemed like a good idea
When Bob reaches forward, the blood begins to writhe

{Wraithost is a parasite that has a parasitic relationship with the Host part}

consuming it would have most likely lead to the parasite infecting Bob
Bob looks around for a safe source of food
It then realizes that there are berries in the trees

The Megaiasloth, weary from its outrage, defeatedly lumbers back home without any food
It looks into the distance and sees the forest is quiet and that the trees are still
…But a few look out of place…

Bob scales tree after tree picking berries to help the Megaiasloth
After a while, it rests under shade provided by the tree looming overhead
The tree then begins to slowly move
In a swift motion, the top of the tree comes down and attempts to bite Bob in one fell swoop

The willowyrm above goes for another swing and lets out a call
Bob stabs the willowyrm’s leg with its spear, but does little damage because of the thick skin
A few other willowyrms begin awakening to the call and stomp over to the location

Bob realizes that it is fighting a hopeless battle and begins running

The pack of giants pursues without effort
Bob retreats to a cave nearby, essentially sealing its own fate
The wyrms gloat over their victory, shaking their long necks while roaring loudly
One reaches its head in for the kill…
…when the Megaiasloth slams its heavy body onto the Wyrm’s neck, killing it almost instantly

The other three wyrms back up in surprise, realizing that the Sloth could kill them if they were not careful
The three Willowyrms surrounded the Sloth, preparing to coordinate an attack as they had done to their victims for years
However, the Sloth lunged at the nearest one, toppling it and causing it to roar in pain
The other two Wyrms saw this as an opportunity and attacked

One of them lets out a sonic burst, attempting to temporarily immobilize the Sloth
The other bites into the sloth’s back, ripping out the shrubs on its shoulders
The sloth writhes in agony as the wyrms began tearing its back apart
Bob thinks that there would be no winning this battle

Bob quickly dashes past the remaining Wyrms, hoping to run to safety
It throws a stick at the eye of one Wyrm, irritating it
The other notices and turned to Bob, taking its focus off of the Sloth
The sloth, recovering from the vicious attack, focused on the earth, forming rockoids straight of of the ground

Megaiasloth then picks one up and crushes it, the life energy flowing through its body and mending all of its wounds
The Sloth then reached for one of the wyrms and threw it away
The last Wyrm saw that the tide had turned and retreated into the woods to hide
Bob gazed at the Sloth, wondering how it was able to recover so quickly
the Sloth then saw the berries Bob had collected and grabbed a few of them to save for hibernation

Bob then remembered its quest to reach the kingdom
As if the sloth heard its thoughts, it nodded and turned around to head toward its home
as it turned, 2 sltohras emerged from the bushes, bouncing excitedly as the Megaiasloth carried the berries toward them

Bob began heading onward, realizing a new strength in making allies.

{PART TWO}

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Soon, the forest faded and stone dominated the landscape
Bob had arrived at the mountains where there were fewer challengers looking for a fight
From the top, Bob could see many monsters gathering toward each other
The entrance was nearby, but it would be unapproachable until there were none trying to enter
Bob decided to take up shelter in a nearby cave

There are a few oddly shaped rocks inside
Suddenly, they begin to come together and form a Tezcacoatl
The Coatl, being an aggressive creature, lets out a roar
Some of its pieces fall to the floor and rearrange into rockoids
The Coatl then crushes them in its jaws, using their energy for a deadly attack
Bob barely dodges and hurries back outside, ready to ambush the stone snake when it comes out
However, it made pained sounds from inside the cave

Bob slowly approached it, ready to dash to cover at any second
The coatl gave a threatening growl, then saw that Bob meant no harm

There are ice shards wedged into Tezcacoatl’s pieces
Bob pulls them out cautious the entire time
After all of them are removed, the stone snake seems to relax
The Coatl then makes a comfortable purr and floats deeper into the cave without a fight

As Bob begins to relax, it prepares to set up shelter for itself
A sharp caw echoes through the cave
Bob turns around and saw a Cryokaiser at the mouth of the cave
Bob readies its spears and prepares for a fight

Bob throws a spear at the Kaiser’s wing
It pierces the wing, causing the Kaiser to wail in agony
The icy bird then shimmers, its glow beginning to take form
A second bird is created and uses its energy to heal the original
The kaisers keep cloning until they surround Bob

Bob, unsure of what to do, lunges toward a clone, killing it, and dashes toward the cave’s exit
However, the clone burst in a flash of light, and Bob is blinded temporarily
Now, there is no telling which Kaiser is the original

One of the Kaisers advances and forms a swarm of small icicles using its powers; it then hurls them at Bob
Bob dodges a few and hits one at a clone, killing it
The clone releases its stun and disappears
However, the clones keep cloning, filling the cave
Every time a clone dies, Bob becomes disoriented for some time
Bob tries in vain to kill as many clones as it can

Eventually, Bob is hopelessly outnumbered and sprints out of the cave, swarms of ice shards following behind it
A storm has kicked in, slightly hurting Bob as it gets pelted with hail
When all the clones leave the cave in purusit, they are hit by the hail and begin disappearing
The Kaisers stay in the cave, cawing maliciously as Bob makes a narrow escape
Bob knows that it will die if it doesn’t do anything about the Kaisers
Hatching a plan, Bob leaves the mountain peak
…time passes…
The storm ends, and the flock of kaisers leave the cave angrily in search of Bob

They split up and comb the whole mountain for any trace of it
One kaiser finds Bob, and makes a war cry
The other kaisers hear it and begin flying over
Bob, now ready to spring the trap, quickly runs away down the mountain with the flock right behind
Away from their element, the Kaisers’ powers are weakened
Bob then takes a sharp turn and dashes toward the congregation of monsters at the entrance to the kingdom
It hurls a spear toward them and ducks swiflty runs for cover
The kaisers rush around the corner to see the group of now angered monsters facing toward them

The two groups engage in a massive battle
The might of the challengers quickly overwhelms the fragile clones, but as the clones die, more are created
Bob uses this opportunity to dash to the entrance of the kingdom
It grabs the spear and hurries in without being seen

As Bob enters, a strange sensation overwhelms it and renders it unconcious
As it wakes up, it sees a large cavern housing several formations resembling termite mounds
At the middle of this, there are several mechanical and crystaline structures
Bob looks down and sees the dismantled corpses of other monsters

It decides to make weapons out of the corpses
In the middle of this process, a nearby corpse awakens and slowly lifts its head
the broken geartyrant swings its massive fist toward Bob, who leaps up and stabs it
the Tyrant is surprised by the weapon, which cuts through its metal body as if it were butter
However, the Tyrant quickly recovers and reverses its injuries until there is only a small scratch {lifeflip}
It then launches a bolt of darkness toward Bob
Bob dodges this and begins running toward Geartyrant
the Tyrant keeps trying to shoot Bob, but it is too fast and leaps into the air
Bob cuts it down the middle, shocked by the might of this weapon

Now armed with this deadly spear, Bob prepares to topple the kingdom

Its going to get revenge for all of those slain by Tim

{PART THREE}

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Is it too long? Or is it okay?

It’s okay…Good job buddy.Atleast you are interested in it.

Long ago, way before the great battles in Othlon Capital, the world was desolate. There was no life, only dry earth and empty oceans. However, countless earthquakes shook the earth, volcanoes erupted and spewed melting lava, and dozens of hydro tornadoes stretched miles into the sky. Lightning flashed and holy and shadow clashed! What were the causes of these phenomenons? Dragons, 5 Great Wyrms to be exact. They battled day and night, each one against their counterpart, to see who was stronger and just for the thrill of it.

Eons passed and out of sheer boredom, the 5 Great Wyrms came together to have a discussion. Telepathically, the water wyrm said that she wanted others to awe on how great she was, and how she could make hydro tornadoes that were only limited by the water in the ocean. To try to persuade the other 4 she said “we are all so powerful that we don’t fear each other and we are only stronger than our opposites situationally, but still even then we wouldn’t be afraid.”

The shadow wyrm responded to her and said “We could create lesser beings than ourselves, give them slight power over our elements and we could use them and battle in teams, and our battles will be the grand finale, there, all of them will be astonished by all our powers.”
They all seemed interested in the new idea that they all agreed to combine their powers and create habitats that would be the dwelling place for their creations.

During the years, each wyrm of each element, created monsters that would be strategically powerful over the creations of their counterparts. Then they agreed on a specific number of creations who would be given abnormal power to link the rest of monsters.

Thus, Earthly life was born. The seas, the land, the shadow, the holy, the electrically unstable environments, were all thriving with life.

To be continued.!(I got class)

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Lmfaooo
Did he survive on hold ground?

Did you quit your story?

Yes, I want more!
Too funny and interesting. plz make part 4!

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I did not quit, I am take break

I will probably continue soon

TO Be Continued.
Btw I keep imagining Bob as that voo doo doll monster.

Bob makes its way across the carcass wasteland
Suddenly, a heavy mist settles across the area
Bob readies its spear and prepares for an ambush
Still advancing, Bob begins to wonder what is happening

Suddenly, a shadow from the corner of its eye moves out of sight, driving fear into its heart
Bob looks around to see a form advancing on its location
It stabs into the fog

A dry, hollow cry follows
The shadow then dashes across Bob, leaving a trail of hissing blood behind it
The blood melts through the corpses below it
From the mist, the attacker makes another leap
Bob whacks it with the bottom part of the spear, knocking it onto the floor

The Arachnodrake quickly rights itself, preparing to initiate combat
It dashes toward Bob, but Bob quickly sidesteps
The Drake, now frustrated by its failed attempts to hit Bob, begins leaking mist
It surrounds itself in the fog and disappears
Now appearing as a vicious cloud of mist, it makes an unpredictable leap toward Bob
Bob stabs it, but it just dissipates
Suddenly, another cloud leaps out from behind and tries to reach Bob
{The Drake can control the fog}

Dozens of forms hurl toward Bob, who deflects and dodges them
The cloud that the Drake was in is hit, and Arachnodrake falls to the floor with a gash in its face
The fog around them fades away, revealing a path to the Kingdom, littered with bodies
Bob quickly runs away, afraid of any surprises the Drake may pull
The Drake suddenly cries out in horror

Bob turns to see the Drake melting into the floor {finishing snap}
A large, molten fin peaks from the corpses
The Magmarinius, now fueled with blood, turns to Bob, its eyes wide with hunger
It leaps from the dead, bellowing with the power of a volcano
Bob rushes to the path, hoping to get to the citadel before the Magmarinius reaches it
Each time the molten shark misses, its power and size grow from the corpses it consumes

Bob makes it to the walls of the citadel, but the gates are closed and no one is outside
The fin tears to the Earth beneath it like a knife through butter
The Magmarinius tears out of the ground, opening its mouth
Bob throws a berry to the side, hoping to distract the shark
The Magmarinius turns at the sudden motion and goes for the bait
It crashes through the wall, destroying several buildings on its way

Suddenly, several monsters appear and start battling the molten giant
Bob enters the kingdom, where several onlookers stare at the destruction before them
It makes its way past the crowd
Several monster species have taken up residence here
A few roidguards patrol the area, looking for any crime that might happen
A doomengine struggles against a few guards as it is taken away from a boxercar, most likely to meet the same fate as the monsters outside

Bob arrives at a second wall
There is no gate, but a few Jawshanks are at the entrance
They turn to Bob, suspicious, but mind their own business

After Bob enters the second gate, the Shanks look at each other and grin

Bob enters a building, searching for where it could be chosen to fight Tim
As Bob enters the building, a figure waits
Shapes behind the figure begin moving in a hypnotic motion
Bob feels a heavy drowsiness overtake it, but snaps out of it by giving itself a small cut
The figure appears to be agitated by this, and steps into the light
The goldtail then opens the valves all across its body, releasing pale gas that seems to be the cause of its sleep powers
Bob barely holds on as it drifts off, driving the small cut it gave itself deeper and deeper
Bob then stabs the Goldtail, causing it to wail in almost a whisper
Bob leaves the building, now aware there was nothing of value here

Suddenly, a weight leaves its shoulders
A small monster takes Bob’s spear and runs off with it
Bob chases the theif into an alley
It turns around, its small beak turned into a smile
The penguini gives the spear to a figure in a chair
The Godfeather takes its cane, throws it to the side, and tries out the spear
Bob takes the cane and hopes to get the spear back from the Godfather

The large penguin gets out of its chair and makes sure there is no one nearby
It then lunges for Bob with its mouth wide open, revealing the reinforcements added to its beak {last bite}
Bob dodges, but the Godfeather goes for another bite almost immedately after, giving no room for Bob to steal its spear back
Bob uses the cane to hit the penguin’s arm
This causes the Godfeather to release the spear and clutch its flipper in pain
Bob grabs the spear and runs out of the alley

The Godfeather goes to its throne and takes a strange device from it
It begins beeping

Bob hears the revving of an engine
The Jawshanks barrel toward Bob, who dodges to the side and impales one of the sharks
Bob then gets on the motorcycle and pushes the pedal
It rockets forward at an unprecedented speed, leading Bob to almost run into several monsters
The remaining Jawshanks pursue

One Shank pulls off and heads in a different direction
Bob notices this and prepares to get bounced
While driving the cycle, Bob takes some of its berries and scatters them on the floor behind it
The Shank behind it runs over the sticky fruits, causing the vehicle to begin jerking
Bob jumps off it cycle and runs toward the immobilized Shank, stabbing it and knocking its cycle over
The remaining Shank circles around and drives toward Bob
Bob, unprepared for this, makes a narrow dodge
Then, Bob cuts off a tire from the broken cycle and hides behind it as the Shank barrels toward it
The Jawshank tries to dodge the tire, but accidentally hits a roidguard on the side of the road
The guard then turns toward the Shank and attempts to pacify it
The Shank resists
As they fight, Bob flees the scene

All this time, they have been heading toward the middle of the kingdom
Bob arrives at a large circular building where several roars and cries can be heard
It enters the building, curious
As it enters, a large explosion appears from the middle of the field
As the dust settles, several beams of light begin flashing through the smoke
After a few more flashes of combat, everything clears and a ruined Deodragon lies on the floor, with a figure in front of it
The figure rips off a wing of the Deodragon, which roars in agony
It then impales the dragon with it, ending its misery
The figure turns toward the audience, and cheering erupts

This could only be one monster powerful enough to do such a thing…
…Tim.

{PART FOUR}

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Bob hurries through the crowd, desperate to make progress to the center of the Kingdom
Tim senses movement and turns toward where Bob is
Tim launches a bolt of energy which leaves a sizzling spot where Bob just was
Bob then rushes out of the building, being careful to avoid the monsters around it
Tim soars out of the arena through a hole it shot through the wall

Bob weaves through the passing monsters
Tim loses Bob to the crowd
It gets frustrated, and begins massacring its own citizens
Bob sees the slaughter and continues its escape

Bob comes to a third wall with a closed gate
A pair of Scarleguards stands alert at the entrance
Bob sneaks closer to them, ready to take them both out with its spear
Suddenly, the gates open and dozens of Scarleguards fly out of the gate toward the slaughter
Bob realizes that it is far outnumbered by the dragons

Bob sneaks around to another part of the wall
It begins cutting with its spear, but progress is slow
It hears a sound behind it
An Aegisdragon approaches it and gestures for it to get out of the way
It then slams its wing into the wall, creating a large hole
It then turns its head to the streets and lets out a call
Several monsters suddenly go alert and rush toward the opening
It appears that Bob is not the only monster that wants justice

The stream of monsters enters the third layer, where all of the guards and important monsters reside
The guards begin streaming out of the buildings
A Doomengine builds a clone of itself and begins to transform into an explosive
A Dusicyon lets its energy flow into the monsters entering the fight, surrounding them in a magic shield
However, the scarleguards in the defensie line shatter the shields easily

Bob, the Aegisdragon, and the transformed Doomengines head toward the center, determined to end Tim’s reign
A Flocculasaurus smashes a section of the wall into rubble and begins trampling guards in its path
Bob turns to find a squad of Abyss Soldiers readying their tridents
A pair of Doomengines rush forward and explode
A few soliders remain, and Bob readies to fight them

Tim has calmed, now that its anger has been taken out on the citizens
Tim turns to hear the sound of combat and flies back in a rage

The rebels start being eradicated by Tim, who takes them down with ease
The begin trying to swarm Tim, but it still mows down their numbers
Bob realizes that this is its only chance and hurries with the Aegisdragon even closer to victory

Bob breaks into the innermost building with a squad of rebels
Because all of the guards are dealing with the problem outside, the group finds no resistance guarding the middle
Suddenly, the Aegisdragon swoops in front of Bob and gets hit by a mighty blow
The dragon falls to the floor, dead
Bob hurls its spear toward the Aviaeronix that killed it
It pierces the Bird’s metal shell
It lets out a shriek and shuts down

Bob gets to the highest floor of the building and looks up
The building stretches past Bob’s vision, and it realizes that this building holds up the cavern
Bob takes a deep breath and swings at the column

The entire place shakes with the effect of the spear
Tim, now realizing that a monster made it to the center, flies toward the pillar in panic
Bob repeatedly cuts into the pillar
Tim shoots a beam that Bob narrowly avoids
However, the beam curves toward Bob
Bob is forced to throw itself to the side, hurting itself on the hard crystal
Tim lands on the building, readying another beam in its mouth

Bob continues to dodge and cut away at the center
Tim then lunges at Bob, who blocks the attack with its spear
…One touch and it’s over…
Tim then grabs the spear out of Bob’s arms and snaps it in two
Bob, now weaponless, begins to think all is lost

Bob then sees Tim’s beam cutting through the floor toward it and gets an idea

Bob runs from Tim’s attack and tries to get it to destroy the pillar
However, Tim is smart and cuts off the attack whenever it would hit the pillar
Bob starts to tire and needs to do something, or else Bob will eventually get hit
Bob continues to avoid the attacks, but also begins approaching Tim at the same time
Tim slowly backs up as it attacks, ready to fly away if necessary
Suddenly, A blast knocks Tim off of its feet

The deceased Deodragon hovers in front of an Aurodragon which supplies it with life energy
Tim, now that its wings are scorched, turns and shoots through the Deodragon and the Aurodragon in one attack
Bob grabs the broken shaft of its spear and hurls it at Tim
Tim turns and launches a final beam
Bob punches Tim’s jaw, causing its attack to cut straight through the pillar

Tim realizes what it did and roars in despair
After a few seconds, Tim sees no way out
It then sits down one last time and bows its head, accepting its death

Bob knows this is the last sight it will ever see
As it begins turning to dust, it knows that it did well
It closes its eyes and prepares to die…

The monsters below see the cavern collapsing
They decide to put their fight behind them and look for a way to escape
They see none

The rocks above begin raining down
The monsters below begin blasting them with their attacks
Several monsters are crushed beneath the boulders
After the ceiling completely collapses, only a few monsters remain
The sun shines on Tim’s kingdom for the first time in years
As the injured monsters leave the cavern, they see a broken spear lying in the dirt

{PART FIVE}

So I think its done…

THE END

plot twist: Bob is actually Bob the hobo