It also lacked testosterone and virility, just like the original main storyline. I can’t believe Thale became a champion’s glazer.
In fact, it was Tenguko who destroyed Albion with his ability to remove
Albion >= alyce >>>> cinder >Ayna
Yes
I agree with this, I only read a little and chose to skip it all.
Phrases, like where are you champion, oh champion this and that.
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Yes, but before that, he had killed Alyce and Ayna, and that should have stayed the way it was. It doesn’t even explain how the champion managed to undo that.
I suppose it was a temporary glitch that was caused when Tenguko returned with the Grand Champion, causing the situation to revert to before she was eliminated.
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They tried to abuse self-insert too much. But the event was so good that we can close our eyes.
I finished it and forgot it existed; there was nothing that tells me what a great event I’m going to remember.
Or something that will make me say I’m going to remember this event as something amazing
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Yes it is, I was there then skyherra flew from the sky and ate the moon resulting to eclipse that woke up sterallum from slumber and starting to attack the whole fire nation but there’s no war in ba sing se.
Time travel stuff does end up like tht tbh
This was painful to the bone
Liked the idea of using eras to fight but holy that last era kinda hard
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Personally, and I wouldn’t be wrong if I spoke for many members of the community, this event was very good, both the story and the soundtrack. Congratulations to the entire team; I enjoyed it so much that I already finished it, haha. I hope this is just the first of many.
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After being encouraged to rewatch the story, which I completed on my secondary account, there were several things I didn’t like.
For example, why wasn’t Aethereon present to help in the battle when he is a master of time flow, which could have helped contain the hordes?
As his story says, he could have used his mind-psychosis ability to take control of the monsters away from Cynder; they could even have called Scyberithe to help him.
And now the coolest thing I would have liked is to see Kanna appear from the portal when Cynder is about to use her secret ability in a last-ditch effort to achieve victory.
Kanna even managed to say that she was finally able to reunite with her friends Aethereon and Scyberithe, referring to that FL who conquered the top spot a while ago.
Which would prevent him from achieving his goal so that the champion and tenguko can finish the job.
I would have liked the story to have gone in that direction because I thought the story they gave us was too corny.
Of course, this is just my opinion; you can leave your comments about it.
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Thank you for the feedback!
Because this story is about 3 Cyber Goddesses.
It’s a bit like asking why Iron Man or Captain America isn’t in a Spider-Man movie. Even Marvel needed several movies before all the heroes came together.
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This is impressive! You really proved that the champion can topple Goddesses with Super Epics.
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Yes, from like 5 or 6 years ago when I was doing waifu research lol. I ended up giving up halfway through, unfortunately. Did you find any similarities between our stories?
We didn’t think about Fairy Tail, the basic idea was inspired by Fate/Grand Order, and then we combined it with the goddess setting we’ve been building for many years.
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The story isn’t really comparable to Fairy Tail. It’s just that many concepts reminded me of Fairy Tail, like the bizarre fan service, the emphasis on the power of friendship, and The cancellation of major consequences. But it’s still more palatable than Fairy tail
The characters keep saying things like: great champion, champion here and there haha
Another point that seems important to me is that I think this event should not have been a standard event . It should have ended up in the online history section, like the story of Sakuralisk or Kureo and Mistel. He shouldn’t come back because we’ve already had this story and personally I don’t see the point in repeating it.It might just ruin it.
What seems right to me would be to create more stories; you could offer us a new one every six months or something like that. Like a story about godfathers, a story about the legend of Selene with her fight against Soral (and why not a Soral in boss mode like the firsts ones? We don’t We haven’t had a boss fight in a long time ) , a story about the fd: why do they have two queens?
Furthermore, I suggested you bring back Puzzle Arena, with that famous fight against Tengoku’s team, which is undoubtedly the climax of Stories show that people clearly prefer this kind of combat with strategy, even if Tengoku’s was really too easy.
Partly I think this is because our character doesn’t have a name or a gender. We’re simply known as the champion and Hector Finnegan’s nephew/niece.
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